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cherrys_rule
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0 posted 2006-11-04 05:09 PM


I wanted to talk to you in person,
but knowing you, you wouldn't listen.

When we broke up, all my mind was doing was reapeating your name.
When I look back now all i have to say is,
" Man me and my thoughts were lame."

Yes you were a great boyfriend,
you always said I was a awesome girlfriend.
But there was always something that was missin.

We went out for 9 months,but it felt like like we were together for so many years.
Everytime we were together,
never once did I think to shed any tears.

But now that I think of it,
I should've cried for you.
For all the lies, I thought were true.

How could you go that far,
to go damage my heart and leave a scar?

When you came into my house
you didn't smell like your cologne.
It smelled like you were smuthered in deodorant from Secret.
From then on I played cool, didn't want to deal with the fact that you cheated.

from there on I had enough.
I just wished that our relationship wouldn't be tough.

For the last two weeks of our relationship,
I couldn't listen or look at you.
Because anything you said to me,
how was I supposed to konw that you were telling the truth.

Now our relationship is done.
Hopefully forever gone.

My heart doesn't belong to you anymore.
It belongs to whom ever can be true.
Whom ever has the key to my heart,
that can open the door .
Come right on in and I will adore.

We both knew we wouldn't last.
I guess now we can wish for the best.
All I have to say is good-bye.
Hopefully you'll make it through life.  

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-11-06 11:56 PM


hope you feel better about this... i thought it had good content although it was a little off in some lines...
best wishes,
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

cherrys_rule
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2 posted 2006-11-10 02:49 PM


thanx for your comment. Yeah I definitly got my words out to him, but it doesn't really matter since he went to Deland. It kind of made me sad that he moved but. Atleast i got my thoughts out to him.
secret_truth_lies
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since 2006-11-14
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3 posted 2007-01-06 09:58 AM


AWWW!!! Johnny's a loser for losing you.
cherrys_rule
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4 posted 2007-04-24 08:02 PM


I think I have to agree with you he is a loser. I shouldn't have dated him. Thi=ose 9 months were a waist of my life now that i think of it. GrRrR... he makes me so mad, you don't understand. when i was reading this all over, just thinking of him made me so ticked off.
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