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Dark Poetry #4

This Feeling

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

0 posted 2006-06-13 11:47 AM

I'm surronded by people,
yet I feel abonded
I'm loved by many,
yet I feel rejected.
This feeling is Undescribable.
It feels like fireworks
going off in the pit of my
stomach.
Don't want to sleep.
Don't want to eat.
I don't to do anything.
I can't, it won't let me.
This feeling needs to
go away, but it won't.
It's made it's home inside
me.It will not leave me alone.
How can a feeling cause so
much pain and misery?
I sit and think about it
day after day, but the
feeling stays the same.
Letting it make decisions
for me, it must stop.
Something like this should not
have this much control.

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

1 posted 2006-06-13 11:56 AM

i like the way you conveyed the idea of this feeling in you that dominates everything. its really nice, and i can relate to how a feeling can dominate us. very nice

sic vis pucem parrabellum
if you desire peace. prepare for war.

Alone in the dark
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 105
On the edge of an abyss

2 posted 2006-06-14 05:07 AM

I know this feeling. I know you're pain, because it mirrors my own. I Hope you find an end to your sadness someday. Til then, know that you're not alone.

*Angel*

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

3 posted 2006-07-23 10:17 PM

I can also relate to this very much so...good write thanx for sharing

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

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