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Dark Poetry #4

They came for me

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2006-05-14 06:41 AM

I don't know what i saw
It could have been the dark
the time after the time
maybe i slipped
maybe im lying down
bleeding and alone
shattered on the cold stone
maybe im dreaming
deep in my bones
perhaps i've fell so far
and the last host
the deep pit has claimed me

I do not know where i lay
I do not know what i see
the bright lights of my spark fading
in the perfect blackness

I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain.

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

1 posted 2006-05-14 09:41 PM

i like your poem
but i dont know what you mean by "the time after the time"?

featherpen
Junior Member

since 2006-05-02

Posts 12

2 posted 2006-05-15 01:04 PM

"the time after the time" - perhaps the time after he was attacked. I like this poem. Good job.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2006-05-21 02:55 AM

"the bright lights of my spark fading
in the perfect blackness"

The Story of My Life....Great Write!

-Trina
I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

4 posted 2006-06-26 12:19 PM

The time after the time is the afterlife

The time is life itself so after is death/ afterlife however you choose to see it.

Thanks for great replies

I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain.

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