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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2006-06-08 08:27 PM

It Was Perfect
or So It Seemed
Our Friendship Strengthened
and Still Remained Weak
I Found Myself With You
Not Pretending To Be
I Was Real
Inside And Out
It Was Wonderful
and I Wanted More
But You Kept Pulling Away
I Had No Idea What Was In Store
You Kept Your Secret
and Held It Dear
Pushed Everything and Everyone Aside
Including Me
You Shut Me Out
But I Broke Through
I Wanted To Know Everything
I Wanted You
It Was Give and Take
You Gave Me Your Secret
and Took Yourself Away
Yet I'm Still Here
With Arms Wide Open
My Heart Bleeding
Our Worlds Apart
Doesn't Have To Be
I Still Care About You, Sweetie
Even If You Have HIV

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

perfect stranger
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

1 posted 2006-06-15 10:29 PM

this poem is so sad but your truely a good friend to write this poem ,always be there.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2006-06-16 03:38 AM

I Found Myself With You
Not Pretending To Be
I Was Real
Inside And Out
It Was Wonderful
and I Wanted More
i did LOVE this bit, so much.
soo sad though.
hearts

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Digital_Hell
Member

since 2006-06-05

Posts 202
Amidst black roses

3 posted 2006-06-21 05:07 PM

very sad but very nice!

hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here
shall we go?
the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Will you walk with me?

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-06-21 07:40 PM

I loved this poem! It was very sweet yet … had an unexpected twist? Well, maybe not unexpected cause I didn’t know what was going to happen but I didn’t think it was going to be that!

I’m not sure if this is a true story or not but if it is I believe you must be a truly wonderful friend. And I hope that the person you are writing about understands that…

"It Was Wonderful
and I Wanted More
But You Kept Pulling Away
I Had No Idea What Was In Store"

I really liked this part, for some reason it stands out to me as being special for me. Like i can relate to it, but not to the whole "story" line. Just different parts, and that is one of them?

Great write on this one, i'd love to see more of your poems

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niere
Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 77

5 posted 2006-06-22 06:58 AM

''You Kept Your Secret
and Held It Dear''

That line to me is a very powerful one. I love it.

Very heartfelt piece, but very well done.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2006-06-22 08:53 PM

Yeah, Sadly It Is A True Story...Thanks For The Replies.

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

7 posted 2006-06-25 06:59 AM

Very Nice, hope to read more of your work.

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