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My Demise pt 2 - My Deity

greysolace
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since 2006-03-27

Posts 71

0 posted 2006-04-02 09:26 PM

My Demise part 2
My Deity

I look away
It pains me to let you see me like this
Not now
In the moment of my weakness
Yet you don’t mind
A hand extends and helps me to my feet
My legs are weak, I wobble
You wrap strong arms around my frame
And help ease away the pain
I can no longer contain it
And open to you
And for the first time ever
I tell my story in its entirety

You take it all in
Not once questioning my tale
Why would you?
You’ve heard part of my story before
This just answers your questions

I fall silent, my tale finished
You hold me tighter, bringing warmth back to my limns
I relax in your embrace, the tension once there, gone
No longer is this burden upon me
The feel of your arms around me gives me strength

I pull back to look into your eyes and you look into mine
And I know now that you are not only my friend
You are my deity

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it picks up right where My Demise leaves off, by the way...i suggest u try readin them back to back...

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

1 posted 2006-04-02 10:18 PM

I loved it.
So mach emotions, you can really feel it. Your right it does help reading the two back to back
Great poem

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