Dark Poetry #4 |
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greysolace Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71 |
Untitled Running down a dark corridor No end in sight So lost So cold Searching for an escape Seeing no light to guide me How did i get here? All i remember is falling Through fire and water Falling forever With no one to catch me Hitting bottom as they say Nowhere to go but away Away from the scene That horrible scene But it doesnt matter now It doesnt make sense Nothing makes sense anymore Tears of anguish began to fall But i make no move to stifle them It doesnt matter now No one’s here to catch them To stop them, wipe them away And tell me that everything will be okay Where is my solace now? With so many words wishing to spill from my soul Does anyone know this feeling? This feeling of loneliness? Chaos and confusion all around me I truly must be lost |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i really liked this, i could really feel the emotion coming through |
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starinthedark Junior Member
since 2006-02-13
Posts 32 |
I felt it too, and yes been there...starinthedark |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
You have a very deep emotion flowing from your soul's essance. LOved it hope to see more like it. alwayz ~SATURN~ |
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