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aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-04-02 06:37 PM

In the darkest of days
you sing no sweet lullaby
To the child in hell

You laugh instead
with delight
shutting out the light
with mischief in you’re eyes

You care nothing of the life
Saying your lies
You hold no consent
To what others might suggest

In you’re head screaming begins
As life goes on
Insanity comes into affect
all you can do is yell out in pain

hoping someone will
but no one will hear
no one will care
who made you this way

the child is crying
hoping for an angel
knowing none can save him
from what you’ve done to him

greysolace
Member

since 2006-03-27

Posts 71

1 posted 2006-04-02 09:21 PM

this poem brings about....thoughts.... thoughts that dont normally come about... i dont kno....
but its really really good

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
greysolace

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

2 posted 2006-04-03 11:49 PM

Thank you for replying
and it gave me thoughts too. I really wosn’t even going to post it.

We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom.

*DWIGHT D. EISENHOWER*

[This message has been edited by aliway (04-04-2006 11:29 PM).]

Ace of Crimson Tears
Junior Member

since 2006-03-03

Posts 14
United States

3 posted 2006-04-10 11:59 AM

That poem brings back memories, ones i'd like to forget but it's better to remember i guess. Dont get me wrong i liked your poem alot. Keep on writting.

~matt~

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

4 posted 2006-04-10 08:56 PM

I’m scared to ask but what tip of memories does it bring up? Not that you have to tell me but I just was wondering.

*leah

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2006-04-11 12:28 PM

I really do love it. I can truly empathize with it. It brings a sence of innocence to somewhat not so innocent themes.

Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

6 posted 2006-04-12 08:32 AM

its was a great poem and i agree it does bring innocence to a theme that is not really full of innocence. - keep writting -

Cherishable_Baybee

wolf mitchum
New Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 1

7 posted 2006-05-16 11:05 PM

uumm i liked the poem,makes me have dark memories of the past,thanks for reminding me,keep on writing

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

8 posted 2006-05-17 04:27 PM

Thank you for replying
I’m sorry for the bad memories my poem had you think about. It wasn’t in till today I realized this poem saying because when I was writing it I was the mad, and words like mischief just seemed to fit.
I’m really sorry

*leah

even in the worst of it I still have hope and in the best I hold on and let go when its time.

Pauline
Junior Member

since 2006-05-15

Posts 28
Island in the Sun...

9 posted 2006-05-17 06:59 PM

i really liked this piece...

it somehow tugs at the heart and really makes you feel...if that makes sense?

thanks for sharing!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

10 posted 2006-05-21 02:25 AM

Hmmm.......Intresting, It Makes You Remember That Which You've Tried So Hard To Forget. Which Is A Good Thing, You Can Only Learn From Your Mistakes, Great Write!

-Trina

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

11 posted 2006-06-21 03:29 AM

Thanks for posting and yeah it does tugs at the heart. I guess it is good to remember the bad stuff that has happened in your life.

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