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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
what has happened to the love of my life only 2 year ago i became your wife you had such a great personality and a big heart but the way things are going soon we will part you loved going to see celtic play football meet some friends and get drunk after gone is a happy man who was once kind and full of laughter now all there is coldnes arguements and dirty women this madness taking drugs changes people makes life full of sadness i cant take much more of this pathetic life past while has been a struggle and strife mabaye one day you will overdose i will no longer be your wife hope you will be happy up in heaven no more drink dirty woman or cocaine one day we will be together again. |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
Your poem is so brutally honest. I feel bad for you and I hope things get better soon... |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
Sorrow ,thanks a lot for your reply,i just keep thinking of the song things can only get better. |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
There's sooo much pain in this poem. You're right. Drugs do change people. and destroy them, as well as thier lives. I've been there. on both sides. And they're both hell to live with. Sounds like he's hurt you badly, and I'm in no way defending his actions, but he must be wrestling some pretty big demons himself. I hope you both find your way out of this and find happiness again. ^*^Angel^*^ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
It’s sad how people can change in such a short period of time, yes, two years is a short amount of time. I hope that no matter what happens things will improve for both of you in the end, and sooner rather than later… This was a good poem though, it got your emotions across to us, which shows you are a talented writer in being able to make the reader feel what you have written… Awesome job on this one, I hope that I will be able to see more of yours soon  @-->--- |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
very honest and un forunately true. a very good rite it conveys your emtions well |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
alone in the dark,thanks a lot for your kind comments,i hope to write more but im not long started so hopefully i will think of some ideas to write. |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
stargal,,i will put pen to paper again soon. that was kind of you to write words of encouragement about my poem |
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