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Dark Poetry #4

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kitvb1
Junior Member

since 2006-01-23

Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany

0 posted 2006-01-26 11:54 AM

Hurt.

It is quiet, creeping, slowly
Building, building, bigger
Rising, big and powerful, ugly
To crash & break...
on my heart.

It goes with a hiss
for a few seconds
only again to rise
high and mighty...
smashing my heart.

Never-ending, constant, ebbing
Building cracks into chasms
Big chunks of nothingness...
In my heart.

Wave upon wave upon wave upon wave

(c)Kit
19 May 1990

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

1 posted 2006-01-27 12:21 PM

Nice write i loved it. it reminds me of the ocean.

kitvb1
Junior Member

since 2006-01-23

Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany

2 posted 2006-01-27 03:09 PM

Exactly

Thank you for the reply
Kit

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