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Dark Poetry #4

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ForeverPoetic
Junior Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 28
Streaming down a tranquil sea

0 posted 2006-01-21 06:24 PM

Im finally on my own
And yet you still manage to break my freedom
You yell about my wrong doings
About my future

I finally get a chance to do things my way
And yet you still manage to control everything
You tell me to do thigs your way
The wrong way

Your a big spender
With little to spend
But yet your tell me im stupid
Stupid for things I purchase

Im not the one in debt
I saw your bank statement
insane isnt the word
forty thousand?

You always had choices growing up
No one controlled you
No one told you, your ways are wrong
I dont understand

Is it a high?
making your son feel like nothing
Do you get a kick out of all of this?
Im not a trash can

You cant just shove words into my mouth
You cant yell them into my head
You cant use force to make me do what you want.
Was this what i was put into this world for?

God save me.

ForeverPoetic
Junior Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 28
Streaming down a tranquil sea

1 posted 2006-01-22 10:01 PM

Guess no one likes my poetry

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

2 posted 2006-01-27 12:39 PM

i like it very nice keep writing.
~Hali~

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