Dark Poetry #4 |
Stupid Sheep |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Jesus, do you see what's going on? Omnipotent eyes, your omnicries Watch them mock you savior Its foolishness with the anti-signs I wanna be with your love for me Set us free,... the stupid sheep I wanna be, away with me Hate is stupid; the stupid sheep Jesus is freedom for the sheep Hate is stupid; the stupid sheep Tell me a secret that I don't know The secret is old because God knows You found a liar leader and you followed him All the way to his death Here's the truthful light you seek Jesus loves you so get on your feet Take your diaper off!! Certain eyes ascertain me, entertain me Pretty plastic pink display Hunility, I love it Its inside me to tell you, push Don't be stupid Satan's whores and worms on a hook Just Jesus love come take a look I want God's love for me and you Set us free, the stupid sheep I die everyday, every second and live for life Hate is stupid, you stupid sheep Freedom, Jesus is our shepherd And hate is a by-product of stupid sheep Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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gelato Member
since 2005-10-27
Posts 63TN,USA |
I liked it and the sentiment behind it. I had one problem with a repetative line: "Hate is stupid, you stupid sheep" Is there another way of saying this, still keeping in the "stupid sheep" of course. |
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Clown New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 4the twisted circus of my mind |
cool |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
i enjoyed this alot, very refreshing to the stuff i've been reading. thanks for sharing "Do not go gentle into that good night, |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Hey, thanks. I appreciate it. Yeah, maybe some of the lyrics or poetry could be better or have a better flow. God bless. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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sanozatsho Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14 |
i see you really want to be an uber munich. is this a rant or a belif if i may inquire? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
That is why I believe God will make this a successful song. I have't finished it yet, but I played a show the other day at a coffee shop and a lady in the audience got up and left right as my first lyrics were coming in. That is awesome. Whether you criticize it. like it, have advice for it, or want me to shut up you're still paying attention. Pay attention to this too. God bless. Jesus loves you inspite of yourself. -GIS So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk. |
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