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Bridge The Gap
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Bridge The Gap |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I found myself, Above your bridge, You stood alone, Was that enough? I will lead you back there now. An angel played your old guitar While the water washed above your blood A little helpless, quite content Quite sedated, from god sent Each string you felt With one hand, Shield your eyes Her will is bright. You found a way, Under my bridge, You stand alone, It’s not enough, Please, don’t take me back there now. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I may be way off but I saw this as one who had passed by their own hand, you reflecting on that and quite possibly feeling them close by (the angel, the guitar) I love your quote btw. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
You know, you could be right. My quote is the Red Hot Chili Peppers, thanks  Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
AHHHHHHHH how i have missed this place. that was BRILLIANTO! i love it. i can't even explain what i like about it... its just so.... mesmerizing. You are way too good for your own boots courty. peace xo lor can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
i was just going through my private library, and i was checking up on all your latest posts and i saw this one... cannot believe i didn't reply earlier!!!! the reason i say this is because it is one AMAZING poem. Lor is right, you are way too good for your own boots! p.s if i could write half as good as you, i think i'd be posting 5 poems a day  . p.p.s in 10 years time, i'll be the one sleeping outside Borders waiting to be the first to go into your book-signing. (kinda like waiting for rock-concert tickets!  )p.p.p.s and i mean all of this from the very bottom of my heart so much love you are so so so talented! The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
yo brilliant yep sure is love it. nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"Shield your eyes Her will is bright." This is a great line. coyote 8) "Only the dead, have seen the end of war." |
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