Dark Poetry #4 |
It Would All Be Different |
SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It would all be different, if you didn't threaten me. It would all be different, if you'd ever opened your eyes to see. It would all be different, If you hadn't closed your mind. It would all be different, If you weren't so blind. It would all be different, If I were in this alone. It would all be different, If you would stop your moan,and groan. It would all be different, If you didnt think yourself so stealth Flying below radar. It would all be different If you hadn't left this deep scar. Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful writing Shara and yes it would all be different, yet without our scars we lie stagnant Painful as they may be, they are our only education in this mess of life . . . xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
and thank you littlewings much appreciated you are. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
The question go around, and they never stop spinning you. And we all puke, and start again. Sometimes you have to put yourself in the other persons shoes, and know that its just as hard for them. Nice. ~Lex |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is *DARK* poetry section. There are over 3000 posts here in DARK poetry, and I don't think I'm the only person that posts poems about hurt, and pain from a past exp. I see it all the time here on this site, and other sites, too. Makes me wonder why mine are singled-out, and made statements like this about them. What is different about mine than any others? I know there is one person that made the statement herself she wished she could write happy ones, and yet I never see anything like *PUKE* on her posts. Why is that? Why is it this is how I am treated? Every body else that feels the bleeding heart within can post and I never see anything like that on their posts. I never see them get comments pretty much saying lay off--it's as hard for them as it is the one posting. Why would it turn anyones stomach? Curious, Shara~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Shara honey , no . . . no no I think lexy meant as in life like a merry go round like: we mess up or life messes us up we puke and get right back up and start living again Lexy? Sweety . . . your writing is beautiful xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Littlewings...you are sweet. Bless ya bunches for healing the hurts. , and Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Shara rose, I'm hoping that the pain will fade with time Don't fear the demons of the night They will fail before hope's light Nor allow fears to scare you Faith and truth will see you through The sun will shine on you once more You'll be strong as you were before Take HIS hand HE will guide you To the path that's safe and true Don’t fear the whispers all around They will fade in lonesome sound And do not heed nor listen to All those who try to frighten you Within your soul there is light Which will protect you in the night Lift your eyes and receive HIS grace Which leaves within HIS loving trace Don’t fear the path is lost to you It is there still so bright and true If you think you’ve lost your way Ask for HIS guidance every day HE will guide your steps safe and sure Until you reach your haven’s shore You’ll see HIS face shines so bright Which banishes fears of endless night Don’t fear the demons that crowd about HE will not allow them to get out Marsha and in the meantime here's some light to brighten your soul as always Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Marsha. This was very sweet. What a lovely gesture, and I appreciate the thoughts, and encouragement these words just gave to me as I read them. Words that heal are not forgotten. I saved this. I hope you will not mind I did that. God Bless, SharaRose @-->-- p.s. I see the name Kethry. Who is Kethry? Is that a poet here at the site? Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Shara rose, Kethry, or as I always refer to her as my beloved Keth, is not just a poet on this site, she is the inspiration that fills my soul. She and I are as interlinked as twins souls can be, her dark matches my light, we are as I've often said woven with the same thread. We might be on opposite sides of the world, but we are truly in sync. There are times when I answer the phone at just the moment Keth rings, and she does the same. We think the same things, we say the same things, we like the same things, she is the other half of me and I am the other half of her. I'm glad you liked the little poem, take care of yourself, for always when you seek it the light will shine. Love and warm stuff as always Marsha :squeze: Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I see. That is very sweet. I am glad you have this connection with your souls twin. Good thing to have. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hugs Shara. It's not too late for things to be different. You remind me when I'm blue, and I'll keep reminding you, k? *hearthugs* |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hugs back to you Please do...and I will do the same for you...well if I see you here. I don't see you much, but I always look for you, and a few others here, but I don't always feel so welcomed to post a reply so there are lots of times I don't. But I can see you welcome me now so I will remind you, too. This comment was full of heart. Thank you so much. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
oops, I should have specified what I meant before I started rambling. sorry. I was refering to life and the point that I got from your poem. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
im sorry for you pain, i wish life was so much different for you, but i know you are a much, much stronger person because of it. that scar tissue deep inside will just make it harder to cut through next time (hopefully there never is another to treat you this bad,i only wish the best for you!) but i always do enjoy your writing, it is always very deep and passionate, but that is how you are, don't ever change, you are a wonderful person, and some day someone will realize and give you the respect you deserve. "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you eor...I appreciate the kind words. Terri~ |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
If you didnt think yourself so stealth Flying below radar. I'm guilty, emotional SharaRose. Very emotional. Nice write. poe If nothing is something |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you for the read, and comment. Terri~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe it would...who knows? loveya |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Not a doubt! It's all perspective. Yes, it would be different. Definately. Love ya girlie Terri~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there's a lot of 'ifs' in life |
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