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Dark Poetry #4

Red

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-01-23 06:38 PM

this is a poem that me and shattered-smiles wrote last year.

Red is the colour of
my heart, just like a
sweet cherry tart. My
heart pumps the blood,
it's as thick as mud.

Red is bitter sweet,
it's the summer heat.
Red is in the flames,
it's like the fire's
playing games. The fire
sometimes crackes just
like you'r lips going
smack.

When the red sunset goes
it goes with a breez that
makes me feel free. The
breez feels so fresh it
brings goose-bumps upon
my flesh.

My blood tastes like iron,
I can hear all the sirens. It
makes me feel tired and
angree how she yells in my
face. All the bad things
she says makes me feel out
of place.

Red is the rose on the table
beside my hospital bed, as
the sunset glows through
the window over my head.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-02-03 10:32 PM

cool poem guys....it was great.

Midnightdreamer

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-12 06:45 PM

this is really good. i like it and great job!

KgIRL
Junior Member

since 2007-11-14

Posts 14
australia

3 posted 2008-02-15 06:39 AM

i like this poem!

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