Dark Poetry #4 |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Friendly smiles Open mind Empty look Great big smile Perky great to meet A thousand ways to get away I see the limit of your faith Its full extension You see an empty face You don't see enough Watch the notch in motion change He whittles it away Open minded clever Fill in the gaps, paraphrase I'm not worried at all The big gory x-rated scenes Cross your lonely face And stretch threads of silk with thorns, The blood gushes through The tears and the pain seen from above I watch your sadness From here In my mind The torment you can't deny... is no secret and he knows from his garden of bloom where he watches it all angels in wait... Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I may be way off here but man I saw a lot in this: first I saw a preacher who has lost his faith and still has to face a congregation, then I saw Jesus - in Gethsemene, behind him, the devil . . . waiting. Like from the Devils' point of view - a fallen angel. I even saw God watching His son from above. In his torment. This is astounding, Craig. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx, I wrote it thinking about a girl at work. She's pretty hot, but there's obviously alot more to her than just the way she looks. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awww now reading it like that - I love when I get so much out of a write. its beautiful. Good Luck. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you Sue. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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