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Ash (Senryu Challenge) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Bones emitting truth stack, one atop another collocating flies. _________________________________ The challenge is here: /pip/Forum7/HTML/000662.html [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-27-2005 10:03 PM).] |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
birth a lavae feast to release these throttled bones from the stain of flesh |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
VERY nice, Edder. I LOVE this. You outdone my flies. *grin* Very well met indeed! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hate bugs... Death births its larvae Causing maggot mania disintegration oh yuck! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahahahah - and again, she comes through. Bravo! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sue, vivid image.... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ossuary as nursery Yup! Nice one Susie! Also Edder and Sharon...well done |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you , I think its cool that people are just posting senryu replies. *grin* |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
ah yes, this was amazing indeed. touche'..! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks, there are a couple of challenges in this post alone, I still think yours was quite amazing. Thank you. |
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