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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Alone in it all, she wonders how she got to this place. Was it something she said or an action she took? If only someone would tell her the truth. She wants answers, no more questions. She's ready for it all to end. To get it over and done with. Everyone passes and watches her walking aimlessly along the road with no place to go. They point and stare then move down the line. If only someone would tell her the truth. While she waits for a miracle, she'll suffer through the silence and tears still wondering... [This message has been edited by shattered-smiles (01-25-2008 06:16 PM).] |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
wow.....that's cool. Midnightdreamer |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Thanx. Oh, and welcome to PiP! TJ [&] she's a blood broken rose |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
Its seems the character or the one u have in your mind , she is facing a situation where she is feeling utter helplessness. Or is it that even after getting such close to some one she is yet so alon......? Anyways a good one.... |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
The person in my poem is facing a situation where she feels absolute helplessness. Even though I don't like to admit it, the characters/people in my poems are most often myself. TJ [&] she's a blood broken rose |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
So I was correct!!!! and yes I know that its the feelings which one has in his/her heart is what comes out in his/her poem( though not always...)Whatever may be the reason for this..... trust me that you will find an another day which will tell you that this has happened for good..... And I have a Poem as an answer for this ...... I will post it soon... I liked ur frankness God gives and forgives, we get and foget |
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jvj-003 Junior Member
since 2008-02-05
Posts 17INdia |
I have tried to reduce your pain by means of a poem posted by me titled "Feel a pain, you will feel a life" !!! God gives and forgives, we get and foget |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Thanx jvj. TJ No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real |
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