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shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-02-02 04:51 PM

A piercing scream filling the air
Everyone turned and stared
At this girl of 13
Standing on the road looking so very scared

With her hands lifted to the sky
She sinks down to the ground
Her body going limp as the last tears fall
She doesn’t make a sound

Crimson forming a circle
Around her body fast
The last marks were the lines on her wrist
That breath would be her last

She lays there on the cement
The minutes slowly passing by
Everyone will depart from the earth sometime
She’s just a younger one to die

Her empty corpse still on the ground
No one notices that one day
That will be me
Lying on the walkway

Because I can’t do this anymore

[&] she's a blood broken rose

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

1 posted 2008-02-02 08:12 PM

Wow don't kill your self ok, I loved the poem but it sounded like your in deep pain, if you do feel this way, remenber alway that In darkness Light comes in no matter what, Normally when not see or felt, For light takes many shapes, Keep your mind free from this darkness, For darkness dies when you turn on the light.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-02-04 11:01 PM

Sad poem.......but it's one that i like.

midnightdreamer

jvj-003
Junior Member

since 2008-02-05

Posts 17
INdia

3 posted 2008-02-05 05:14 AM

I liked the poem. U know what ... I beleive that wihtout pains , u cannot ever know what happines is. and this poem of yours helps me a little to understand about you. I dont knwo whether you are really into a debacle, but your poem is well written, with all the needed maturity.

JvJ

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

4 posted 2008-02-06 08:37 AM

Thanx for all the commments. I believe that too, without pains you can never know the true meaning of happiness. I haven't really gotten to that true happiness exactly yet. I'm working slowly towards the goal of happiness. It always seems though that I'm taking one step forward and two steps back. I don't know what to do so I just write it out in my poetry. Especially since poetry is practically the only thing I have that won't get ripped away from me.
TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-02-11 07:21 PM

Sad... but very good!

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

6 posted 2008-03-27 06:36 PM

thanx

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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