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Dark Poetry #4

Hell Spiraling Upward

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

0 posted 2005-07-05 01:02 PM

You look at me
Tell me
It will be ok
But I can't belive that
Not after yesterday
Because I looked around
And found
That I have always been alone
Maybe I'm marked
A sing
That implies
Do Not Touch
Maybe I have become
What I always thought
Invisable
I could be standing in front of you
Bleeding
Screaming
Crying
Dieing
And you would look through me
Continue watching your movie
And I have noticed
A darkness
Spiraling upward
Something reminisent of hell
With and old, hot smell
To black to see into
To black to see out of
And maybe what I feared has come true
Hell wants me
Because I am too bad to stay
Above ground
With the unaltered

"Love struk my heart and it fell from the sky. I wish I wish it not to die. And if it goes and your to late I wish I wish you not to hate."

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

1 posted 2005-07-05 05:26 PM

I love this....

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

2 posted 2005-07-08 03:30 PM

Thanks....

"Love struk my heart and it fell from the sky. I wish I wish it not to die. And if it goes and your to late I wish I wish you not to hate."

Necro_Slade
New Member

since 2007-01-25

Posts 1
Fort Carson, Co

3 posted 2007-01-25 04:37 PM

You told me not to find you, and I'm sory to go against that, but your words are so powerfully beautiful......

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

4 posted 2007-01-26 04:10 PM

wow so i am not the only one...

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