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Begin Again
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Begin Again |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Begin Again ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Begin a slow descend that escalates with time mired in thoughts of ebon blackness permeating this state of sane-of-mind spirals drawn of pitch-dark consume downing me, drowning me in my need to Begin~ a slow ascend reaching upward, within moving toward the glow of the light that beckons me 'come higher' in my flight reaching out to outstretching arms grasping hands of pure love I find that I ~Begin to rise once more seeking to bask in light away from this shadow of black that held me captured for too long a time in full control of my senses I am determined to rise in renew Begin~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This reminds me of trying to escape from a nightmare and I suppose in a way, it is! Very impressive write! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! Marge...good to see you write something in Dark. True..it did feel like a nightmare! Hugs~Nance |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Brilliant, Marge. It had such a surreal, nightmarish quality. The language you used was quite chilling. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Extraordinary piece Marge! I really enjoyed it. |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
i like how this shows from dark to light to back to dark....very nice... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all ... it is always a challenge to me to weave the little Rictameter's together~ Dark and light ... how well they compliment one another~ I write my heart and throw worded-lifelines to friends~ Appreciate the kindness of your replies~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Love this |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
Another good one Thanx for sharing  Like the way its set up too btwPeace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I greatly appreciate the replies and the notice of the presentation form~ I daresay that I 'fudged' just a tad in weaving the form together ... but, somehow it just works for me~ A 'true' Rictameter is comprised of - First line - two syllables Second line - four syllables Third line - six syllables Fourth line - eight syllables Fifth line - ten syllables Sixth line - eight syllables Seventh line - six syllables Eighth line - four syllables Ninth line - ending with the same two syllable word that began the piece~ It just looks 'prissy' to me .. and I love to do them~ **Give it a shot of your own ink** *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Going "up and down" with your rising and beginning. Very Inspirational |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
I can close my eyes and feel your words from a world of darkness, into a world of light... I can relate to your words, to the feeling of "begin again" Nice! Thank you for sharing Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
it is an amzing feeling to begin again |
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