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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-04-01 02:36 AM

please
don't hold my hand
cause i won't let go
dragging you down
to where you don't want to be
don't wipe my tears
they will just keep on falling
for you
to touch my skin
and remind me that
you are real
and I'm not dreaming
that I'm not insane
please
don't let me forget
you and everything you are
to me and everyone else
don't let my hands
ice to the memory
of you
and everything that keeps me going
don't let me fall too far
cause you know I will never stop
f
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l
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*Note: First thing i have written in a LONG while, and it's just not coming to me. I even have my most motivational poetic song in the backround, but its not delivering! *still has full faith in Jewel*

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2005-04-01 06:16 AM

I find an affinity with your words here, well put I say!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-04-05 01:07 AM

If it hasn't come to you yet, then I say it's well on the way!

Aw Jeez, um, ok, well, too beautiful, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
I gave you the Brando photo, and you gave me this, so we're even.
Such awesomeness.
Ah! Love you so much!

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

3 posted 2005-04-05 02:37 AM

I love the humanity in this poem. It was touching.

dodge_chick2003
Member

since 2004-01-18

Posts 136
California

4 posted 2005-04-05 03:59 AM

For some reason thi spoem seemed to drag me in. And thats very rare. If this isnt one of your best then I want to read one of your best. This poem was amazing.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

5 posted 2005-04-05 05:33 AM

oh wow

dude why cant you see how great this poem is

teehee its been too long since ive read one of yours or courts' or kursts and ive been missing this so bad, this feeling of like breathlessness!

wow shyt it kicked

eeeeeeek so glad im back into DP4 and all you poets

lov ye

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

6 posted 2007-05-26 03:17 PM

yea, you're write it was absolute fantatically great. but it was good. it's coming to ya! i'm tellin ya. good job, I really liked it. jewel is goood. =]

Becca.

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