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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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take my hand take it now mould it with your palm and let every wrinkle vein fingerprint become known to everyone of mine hold it so tightly i cant feel it anymore grip never let go hold on to me let your hands become interesting strangers lingering on my doorstep wanting needing caressing more and more loving feeling emotion i need more and more holding caring more time to let your hands meet every inch of me wanting needing loving. put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Ooooooooh, I liked this one. Lusting and loving. Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat work my feathered friend. I really liked this one. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
aww. i loved this one. it's so great to be held by the one that means alot to you. i loved it!!!! you should write some more like this. great job, bravo. =] Becca. |
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