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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2005-01-23 08:47 PM

I'm a stranger, watching the crowd
From the outside.
And you try to console me
with cheap smiles and pseudo empathy.
But no one can relate,
When you're feeling this lifeless.
An empty shell, without a soul and
a broken heart beating out of rhythm.

Close my eyes... and wish
this pain away...
But it won't let up
it won't let up.
And no one is willing..
to rescue me.
from me.

Blades and things dig into my skin
offering short sympathetic comfort.
But sure enough, it runs away
and leaves you stinging with
regret the sort, that never fades..
never fades
like the deep scars.

Close my eyes... and wish
this pain away...
But it won't let up,
no, it won't let up...
And no one is willing..
to rescue.. me.
from me...

Please rescue me...
I want to feel again...

Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-01-23 09:00 PM

ooooh! it is soooo emo. awesome!

i lovovoved it. awweeessoome. so wicked.

this was pretty cool, especially the repeated stanza.

laura

you're the only one keeping me alive

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2005-01-25 08:09 AM

this is seriously beautiful.... i swear to god we are living the same life... lol... this is freaky...
thankyou as always for your writing, they always mean so much to me, keep them coming.
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2005-01-26 02:17 AM

hehe YOU EMO YOU!!!

loved it, wicked stuff... yeah the repition worked so well and the "..." that was cool i liked it

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

4 posted 2005-01-31 10:26 AM

vamp, you have this poignant way about you that meshes so well with your "here and now" psychic ability. this one caused tears of regret and of self-inflicted sorrow.
it is a sad way to start the day, but even amidst the sadness, it is so comforting to know that there are others feeling and dealing with what i am... great job!

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

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