Dark Poetry #4 |
Like it wants to |
darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Cut cut cut cut away. sink into it deeper with your scissors. numb it it stings a little. tear it to pieces with your gorgeous Tender Hands. beat it till it bruises help it bleed like it wants to. It may scream it may cry but mute it with a low angry tone. scare it. do what you want to it but just make sure you help it bleed like it wants to. nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. [This message has been edited by darkness_witch (01-24-2005 02:37 AM).] |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
*sigh* wicked. i loved this. sad, really sad, but really great. keep on keeping on soph. laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Don't be so sad, you've got a friend in me right? When yout think nobody cares Nobody cares Nobody cares like a bear (From carebears. God bless) Still, great poem. Hollow. And the legacy runs from needles to guns |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
umm...this feels like me. like that part of me I try to ignore yet give a bit of leverage to in writing. for that reason I don't like this, but the feeling is strong so it is a good poem in itself. - River How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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