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Heart Fever |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Stare at a torn piece of your picture, single tiny piece stabs me heart deep, never heals. One look at you I stop - breathing. Claw myself to dim emotional knives physical pain is better than your eyes. My tears never drown the hurt, wounds don’t stop - bleeding. It’s my own doing, shutting you out, I was terrified of love, the warm feeling you gave me whenever I heard your smooth rich voice. Now, I’m even more afraid of every moment without you. It’s like you died. I talk but there’s no answer. I phone you, someone else picks up. Then you walk by cute little strut gorgeous smile lips I long to - Eyes that proclaim deep infatuation but distracted by another world still locked on mine. Tear my gaze away, still feeling yours. You touch my shoulder from behind then disappear into mocking halls wish I could hold you one last time but it’s clear you are gone. "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I would have given this another name, like "Null Missed of Love" or something. It's cool. Its like you're getting better. Seasoned in poetry. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
yeah, the title is actually the meaning of his name - Muneatsu, wich is Japanese. I thought it went well with the concept of the write. I seriously get feverish when I think about him. I think it's cool. anyways, things have been looking brighter lately. lol. How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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