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Dark Poetry #4

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angele
Junior Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 35
Malta (tiny island in the Med)

0 posted 2004-12-01 10:01 AM

Why does this happen?
a statue made of stone...

why can't i know?
why can't i feel?

guilt, guilt
and more guilt

it's the only thing i know
for sure

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-12-01 11:57 AM

Great~!! So much said in so few words!
I truly enjoyed this one, angele!!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-12-02 01:00 AM

Hope you gain more confidence to show us more of your poetry! This was really good Angele, enjoyed.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

angele
Junior Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 35
Malta (tiny island in the Med)

3 posted 2004-12-03 12:09 PM

thanks a bunch..not many people have seen my work so its really encourgaring to get good repsonses

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