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In Love's Way
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In Love's Way |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
IN LOVE'S WAY: s I watched beyond the shadow of me There came a breeze silently For once in a lifetime an angel appears Swiftly bearing away tears To venture out and lose is gain But never without its untimely pain When will the light of a shadowy me Burn brightly for eternity? Knowing the cycle of daunting rejection Does the decision even bear reflection? Sometimes purposefully, sometimes not Always the same; always another shot For the life-strings of our purposed lives Within and around each other entwines So this the ultimate, age-old question; A lover's heart in a bound confession: Do I place myself in love's way? |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Sorry all, the first "A" of "As" appears to have gotten lost...! Sylvia |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I really like the structure and flow of this poem. Not to mention I really like the presentation of the message. Thank you, Jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I agree. This flowed extremely well, and I could relate! Nicely done! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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