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Dark Poetry #4

The night is coming

NightFall
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since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

0 posted 2004-11-22 02:25 PM

The night is coming down on us
like a blanket over sea
creaping across all land
never touching me
touching the deapest corners
of the night ot be
just like a shadow
reaching out to me.

"My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere.

News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

1 posted 2004-11-22 11:50 PM

"For one so alone, like a prayer on the sea,
Nothing to hide, so much there to see...
Don't be afraid."
Your poem reminded me of these lines of a song written by a friend of mine.
The night has gotten such a bad rap.
It can be so inspiring, and so soul purging.
Nice write.

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

NightFall
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since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

2 posted 2004-11-24 06:45 PM

cool, thankyou for the response.

"My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-11-24 08:38 PM

"The night is coming down on us
like a blanket over sea
creaping across all land"

Like that part...nice write Cheryl!
Happy Thanksgiving!

~Alli~

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[This message has been edited by *Alli4000* (11-24-2004 10:40 PM).]

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