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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Maybe a lack of responsibility Or ignorance Incompletion but, I can see that fierce beast It sits Surrounded in black And sets a feeling Snake through my eyes and show me How easy life is If you pay attention to the small And insignificant details Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
I wonder why I can relate to this write so well. "If you pay attention to the small And insignificant details" I like this line muchly! Most people go through life with blinders on, never stopping to smell the roses. Those that can stop, are the ones that are truly enriched. Great write, Steve. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
heee heee. it's funny how different this is when you are aware of what that snake skin thingy is...lol elsewise, this really, really sounds very deep! those little things like tuning and intonation...they can become really big, bothersome things. and then there's the appearance of speed...lol great poem, craig. just surprised you kept it so short. lol... love ya! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
If you never smelt a rose you'd never know what it felt like. Thanks. I guess the brklyn thing gave me some different stereo-typical ideas about the kind of person you'd be, but from your responses and poems so far you seem pretty cool. AAAAHHHHHhh!!! Mikey, you just ripped my head out of the escape I'd seemed to have gotten from that picture of that guitar. The more I thought about that thing, the crazier its effect on my head got. Wow, lol. Like seeing God putting together a raw thunderstorm, shinny and dark. Sorry for rambling. lol. And yeah that love is definitely in return to you. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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