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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Great visions and efforts Deep heart felt prayers The power to move Love Live Give life and love and spiritual bliss Rip open these steel bars Gallop and run With no where to go, Straight off the edges of reality Into super-reality and spirituality Live a life and hold myself Carry on walking with my own load, But where can I go In a room so small as this, A white room I sit And wait Shrink Slump All the while you keep stabbing with your words I sit and wait Til with death or God do I part And I remain ineffective, silently waiting Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
I sit And wait Shrink Slump All the while you keep stabbing with your words dude what happened here? no one replying to something this good? especially that phrase just there. sigh. good stuff LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
ooo ive been stabbed with someones words before... my own fault, and your right, you do slump and shrink loved it , bloody awesome dude love and empathy sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanks silhouetted and darkness, You guys are cool. Yeah for a little bit it said it had two replies, but for some reason they weren't showing for a little bit. I was thinking, wow are they really that bad? lol. -GIS My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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