Dark Poetry #4 |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Once full and alive? Maybe And contacts slip to glasses While Vodka to pepsi This feel of who I am Is no longer who I was Maybe I'm not anymore Loosely swelling until I'm choking Now arms from no place for certain Give me hugs Promise And I'm so confused Chase and I miss my place To come clear and understand Gelatin skull Fat and wide atmosphere Slip in the cracks Except this place where you forget Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
what was it a friend of mine said? "for in the company of the beautifully scarred, the door never completely shuts..." here is a nice place to be. as for hugs, you are always loved here, craig. and i've missed your writes the past week! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanks eve. You're a cool friend. And if I could figure out how to work those smiley icons I'd probably send some hugs back. (Just pretend, ok. lol) -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Dood, I agree, I have no earthly idea how to make those damm smiley faces, lol! Great job! Steve. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Maybe the smileys are a "cut and paste thing" lol. I mean check it out I think. It looks kinda blank to me. -GIS let God ROAR,... in power... |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Loved this piece... Like the flow but don't understand what's up with the copy and paste mentioned by someone :-P CrEaTuRe Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
The good thing about this poem is it is totally different than its author, for its author is not only "not empty," but so "full up" of spirit that he's overflowing! As for the smilies and the cut and paste thing, no you don't have to cut and paste... when you are typing a response, scroll to the bottom of the page beneath where you click to submit your response, and you'll see the Smilies underlined. Click on that and it'll show you how to type the word for each one with colons at the beginning and end of the word, and there you go...it'll be in your response! Hope this helps... Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah thanks Purity. You're a cool friend. And like I usually say, I love you guys. Creature, thanks. The thing about cut and paste was about me wondering how to insert simley faces. And I guess I know now. -GIS let God ROAR,... in power... |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
another great poem! where do they stop? brilliant. -Laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
oh wow Craig!!! ahh loved this one!!!!! the end was perfect sigh cant say much else love and empathy sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanks Laura, I don't want to call myself great, but they'll probably stop coming when its no longer possible to write. Thanks Sophie, yeah the ending. Kinda like a buttercup on a steamer... _GIS |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Thanks, Purity! Nice poem, Craig, suddenly feels like someone left the air conditioning on, cold....Let's fill our heads with firewood and light a match. Eck, random but hey. Nice poem again. Hollow. Courtney. You just got to see me through another day |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you puryty. And Courtney, you're obviously a genius. I believe that is how I saw poetry being taught on dead poets society. Just random. lol. -GIS My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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