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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Do you think I'm beautiful? I want to ask, as I stand before you. My dark locks tumbling over my shoulders. Do you think about me at every little moment? I wish to ask, my dark eyes Dancing back and forth watching Your own eyes and taking in the curves of your face. No, of course you don't My elevated heart, thunders back into my chest. Ordinary in the worst way to you Not a second do you spend agonizing over things shared between us. Damn you, for not loving me like I love you. Damn you, for not thinking of me, like the hours you drift through my mind. Damn you, for making me feel ugly, worthless and oh so pathetic. I just want you to make me feel beautiful, Even for one day. *I don't like it* "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Me thinks I should've stopped me speaches a long time ago... This was so real to a certain situation of mine that I have carried with me for so long. Excess baggage, I now know. Here's what we do Vamp... Instead of damning those who are a few pages back in the same Book of Love... we must bless them. Sounds like a pile of dung, I know... but, we bless them for showing us that which we are not. We know love. We are a few chapters beyond them in the book. It hurts like Hell itself... but it validates the truth in our love, right???? !@#$%^&*()_+{}":?>< Your poems get to me. And I fight back hoping what I believe will see me through the same dung you are going through. Another memoir I'll keep. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
I feel the frustration, but no one has the right to make you feel worthless or pathetic because you're not. It took me a really long time to figure that one out myself. |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
This has a wonderful flow. You painted a very clear image and stayed with it in style and context. Good job, thanks for sharing. |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
library! |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
how does one make that which already is? (beautiful) mike i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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iwontdrownagain Junior Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 39Massachusetts |
vamp, I feel the pain in this poem more than I've felt in any poem I have ever read. it is such a terrible thing to deal with, knowing someone doens't feel the same or think of you as often as you think of them. Great write. Parmonie "The green of your eyes |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is another beautiful poem..... you always write such beautiful poetry, you get into the head of so many different people amd write what they are feeling as if it up on a screen for you to watch..... this is another that completely relates to me.... well written girl. keep them coming Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
yes, except that the screen i watch is my life. "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
"Do you think I'm beautiful? I want to ask, as I stand before you. My dark locks tumbling over my shoulders. Do you think about me at every little moment? I wish to ask, my dark eyes Dancing back and forth watching Your own eyes and taking in the curves of your face" --------------------------------------------- I remember days like this. I don't know why you don't like it, but I love it. As a matter of fact I would love to add this to my library. I know what this pain is like and soon, just like every other pain in life,it will pass. I'm sorry for your pain, but not for your writing. Keep writing and I will keep reading and sympathizing with you. Take care. Love, Ladycat "Everything changes, everything stays the same."-Bill Austin |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
DAMN HIM! omg, BUTIFUL i loved it LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
(eidted-profanity-Ladycat)hey...this was sooo good. I can relate soo much right now, and it sux...i know how you feel exactly. DAMN all of them. heh. Yeah...i feel better. Great poem tho. Im saving. I ask why, but in my mind, I find i cant really rely on myself. ~~~Linkin Park~~~ [This message has been edited by Ladycat (01-13-2005 03:42 AM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
damn you for making me feel ugly I love that part. I love this poem. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I think this refers back to my old sig. Eccleasties 3:11, "He has made everything beautiful in its own time." And I don't think I spelled Eccleasties right, oh well. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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angele Junior Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 35Malta (tiny island in the Med) |
great.you encapsulated feelings many feel but few can express |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
This was great. AWESOME job. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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