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Dark Poetry #4

Apathy

KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

0 posted 2004-11-14 11:19 PM

Hello my apathy
It sunders all chance
Chance of success
For the empathy of fellowship
Does it love me too?
Or could it care less?
I think it cares too
But then why apathy
Do I care so little for you?

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.
KuruShio (DeadlyBob)

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-11-15 12:03 PM

Maybe a coma after "apathy" in the next to last line. This is a cool poem. Kinda funny. Why do I care about not caring? lol

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
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2 posted 2004-11-15 07:23 PM

Like this.

Oh, btw...i like oreos too.

~Alli~

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