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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden 
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A long time ago, there she stood Emotions hidden for a purpose Weeping gentle sorrow She drew the line Caught in ensuing mayhem She could only wonder What choice do we have There was none to be had Time has passed and so she speaks A new found love so she thought The candle is burnt now So are we Scars will run deep no matter what Hope of curing, never in the plot Her mind is full of mistrust and hate Nothing I say will ever change the past A new beginning for the both of us Fire on that trail will never ease All is done now without purpose A smile in the night sealed my fate |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
It sounds like it wasn't her smile. Cool poem. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"Scars will run deep no matter what Hope of curing, never in the plot" really liked these lines. very good poem steve! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Funny, it was not her smile. Just something that was said to me. Thanks for reading. Steve. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed~  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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