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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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When the wind blows and the trees sway i am reminded of why i love today, each and everyday i spend my time cherising you, as you blow kisses my way. atumn bellows its coming, making collages of leaves, spreading on the barren earth, lifited are spirits of lovers, entwine in your beauty forevermore forgetting that seasons change... I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Some powerful key words here... Cherish, bellows, barren, lifted, spirits, forevermore... Great! Enjoyed, and your opening stanza was beautiful! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
love your poems...nice to see you posting again!  great job.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I posted one more in Teen Poetry. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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