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Looking Through Their Eyes |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
You are not The world to me, And when I see you, I do not stop breathing I laugh at you, When you turn your back And nothing I say Makes you smile. You hate me Everyone knows it And also I hate you. Nothing you did insulted me Nothing you did hurt me Nothing you did annoyed me, And nothing broke me in half. Everything I did back insulted you Hurt you. Irritated you. Everything I did back broke you in half. If you got close to me, I’d scream. Tell you to get away, Plus many other useless adjectives That made you close your eyes, And cry. I hate you so much. But I can’t really claim, That I thought of that saying myself. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
wow..this had some powerful anger in it. i can't help but be curious as to who its about. good write. enjoyed it. love, kirsty "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hmm very interesting hehe you little angry one, you! loved it, very different to your others!!! you should be proud love and empathy always darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
awesome write...such emotion!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
you stand strong there, courts! good angry poem! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I don't think it's about anyone I know. If someone I know feels like this because of me, I would feel soooo guilty. But no, it was sparked by a book I, and Sophie (used ur name!) read. The quote I think was: I would say I hated her, but if you asked me, I don't think I could have told you why. Anyway, thank you for the replies.  Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is seriously hwat im going thru right now at school with one of the guys..... this is really creepy actually... hehehe well written..... keep hem coming... Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I think the whole thing is wonderful, and such a testimony to my state of being "all out of love" at the moment, but the last eight lines were truly, truly inspiring. I remember why this ol'soul always listens to Air Supply. Each new song they come out with speaks of exactly where my heart is... and so does each of your poems. Thank you. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
oooo nice courts! i knew you'd love that book...... grr you used my name!!!!!!!!!!!!! but hey, I just used it in a reply to one of my own poems. love how you always seem to get inspiration from anything..... i envy it!!! woah just read the poem again! ahhh you never cease to amaze me (teehee) love and empathy always darkness............... sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
So Much Anger, I Could Feel It, Awesome Write... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Nice emotion. I really liked it. Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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