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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Look at the girl with the lily white skin and cheeks the colour of soft summer blossoms. Seemingly the image of sweet, gentle to the touch. Her smile spreads wide, but the cynics do notice the lack of twinkle in her eye. Flowing white skirts, a heart of gold. She is a girl Unloved. But who would've thought it? Look at the girl With the sallow skin her cheeks always too ashen. Her back rigid, A smile would crack her porcelain body. Blank and passive, she stands surly in the family photograph, with Mother and Father smiling proudly. She is a girl So Loved. But who would've thought it? "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
cool! i liked that heaps aye! i didnt get it first but then i re-read it and it was awesome. who wuda thought huh? LOR LOR your the only one keeping me alive |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful vamp.... i love your writing... it makes me jealous how you can have something so complex written soo simply... well done girl... always here for ya Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
a friend of mine has taught me to believe that outside this shell of a body, my soul is without gender... now i truly understand this concept, as the girl in this fantastic write is actually me. i'll be reciting this one for eternity. and it was so damn well written! YES!!!!!!!!!! I'd bow to you, vamp~but my fallow bones would break after this one. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
This is your best one ever! Hands down. Or maybe all hands raised in praise. Immaculate in all regards. Rider "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Cool, cool poem. Sad, irony ya know? Hollow. Courtney. And no! I can't tell you who they are. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Oh wow..this was fckin awesome....~~YAY~~~ I loved this sooo much. Im saving Kissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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