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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Brave shining heroes conquered the new world Leprechans own the wishing wells I truly believe this holding my bronze shoes Deep down inside, I believe there's a magical spirit roaming this land of hell we call earth... Maybe it's through reality Maybe it's through fantasy Maybe through both Call yours truly dumb or naive if you want Because I know I'm not I know who I am and exactly where I stand And more than anything, I know my life is more interesting than most, because of these eyes I see through "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
hot diggity... we're on this kick arse thing tonight... this was a very poetic, unique way of telling someone off. glad, hopefully, it's not me. love the thematics in this one. are those eyes bloodshot? lol great poem, news~! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
You know where you stand. I was going to say lucky, but I think I know where I stand too. Now I want to say I stand alone. But other's would disagree. I don't know what I'm saying here. I'm saying...I like your poem very much, it seems you have so much insight. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
It's definitely through both! And I would never! ("Call yours truly dumb or naive")...genius maybe! Great write! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere [This message has been edited by Purity (11-12-2004 12:04 AM).] |
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