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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
When you can almost touch, Hear, see, and live A face white, long, Two red dots on the forehead above the eyes And the face moves closer Like its homming in on you Under water Alive Your loved ones aren't apart of you physically If you leave they can stay if they choose Everything happens for a reason The entire world around happens exactly As it is supposed to God has it pre-planned out Why something didn't work Why something else did Why we meet and your opinion I think because the circumstances are exactly right My entire life is already planned out I just live in it My body and facial features are beyond my control And everything I do Is what my body was doing at that time So all the crap is involuntary Meant to be something of a nobody Even if I were I would still be nothing Five letters on page spell C-R-A-I-G So by all means tear out the page and set it on fire Just let me sleep, free of me After all you can't feel through glass Especially when you're prefectly numb Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Can't burn it...it's already on fire! Take those five letters, tear out the page, and fold them into a rose with five petals...one for each letter. Guess what...your life is not planned out, my friend. Sure, the great Storyteller of all knows all, but that doesn't mean He interferes with your free will. You come by what you know by your own doing...what is it they say, life is only a series of actions and consequences? The thing about C-R-A-I-G being on fire is the world better watch out! I think He's letting you do your thing your way, for the betterment of all! I do agree with Hollow, as you are an inspiration. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
this one stung a bit. but i identify with a lot of it. i agree with purity with the exception of one thing; that paper you begged to burn, when folded (cause i tried it), turns out to be a white carnation... blah, i know; you're making me cheesy...lol good one, c-r-a-i-g! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thats both of you. Wow. I totally felt like crap when I wrote that and you both flipped it inside out. And the fire thing yeah I guess its the burning sensation that rattles my head. Like a green..., orangish flame,... yeah... A carnation? How long did that take? lol. Thats funny. You guys rock and from what I hear literally. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Great Write, Im Sure Whatever YOU Decide To Make Out Of This "Page with The 5 Letters On It C-R-A-I-G", Will Be Magnificant, Just Like Your Poem... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanks. Thats a cool way to look at it. -Craig Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
you should see me now...cuz I'm glowing =) *sniff* you make me proud! *hugs* I likes (duh...understatement?) =) - Bon "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
See you now? I think I'll be leaving the 25th, if I do see you maybe it'll be sometime around February or March. lol. Thanks for the compliment. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
if you leave for the big sky needle town, c-r-a-i-g, how are you going to remain here among friends? gotta laptop? with wi-fi? you better make arrangements to have access to a computer! we need a freak like you!! lol in all sincerety, i truly hope you find what you're looking for. michael ps - how do you guys itallicize and underline? haven't fingered that one yet... i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you michael. I have no idea how to underline and italicize, I'm willing to bet its a cut and paste thing. Which reminds me I wrote a song called Cut and Paste and I don't think I ever posted it. Maybe I will. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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