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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-11-09 01:17 AM

i hate you
i love you
you're the only one keeping me alive
you're too cold
too numb
yet you're the only one keeping me warm
and i hate you
for everything
you make me feel

leave me here
let me long for you
let me hate you so much you can't bear to look at me again
but you will
and i'll let you

can't control this
control you
shut up i don't need your voice
rining in my ears
making me feel
so damn worthless
and i don't need you
holding my hand
telling me everything is alright
cause it isn't.
no [insert curse here] way
is everything alright

cut my throat
just to prove
im not petty
im not scared
of living like you
and i don't need to see your face
perfection makes me gag
makes me want to
love you
like i do
all over again

your the only one keeping me alive

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

1 posted 2004-11-09 01:39 AM

another awesome one...i didn't love it as much as the other..but that poem was special.
this one was cool..
god lor..i love your writing..you put words down in the best way..

lots of love,
Kurst

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-11-09 02:33 AM

So much anger and love, and like an experiment with something and something, they don't mix. I really need to revise science

What is the Benedicts solution for? What's chlorophyll? Arrrgggghhhh. I blew alot of my good notions (?) on the last reply, but anyway I'm here. I want to read your other one, now. Meh. That line gets me alot, I hate you, I love you. Sigh. Need to see you soon girl!

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2004-11-09 09:05 AM

Wow...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-11-09 11:58 PM

ahh.. yes. I know.

Beautiful write. Yes, i really loved it, i think i will save.

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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