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Bitter and Cold in the Rain
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Bitter and Cold in the Rain |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I see the sun and its beautiful today Ever so powerful as it is The rays beat down my brains In a spot of much too much contact with the light And I take a sip of the standing water Mosquitos haven't crowded over at the moment They saw me coming and stepped aside Out of unordinary respect Possibly saving me for a later meal Since they allowed me to drink my goal is to kill Each and everyone of them to be free of this Free vengence I'll be expecting My work here is complete and now leaves a bloody mess Thats fine though Todays showers haven't yet arrived The day has gone by somewhat slow and Somewhat fast And the sky has finally developed a prize pig of darkness I find a simple "shelter" and stand under while Baseball size droplets fall around me In this weather I could almost swear I've been caught up in a battle field Machine guns popping everywhere My shelter starts to crack Water starts to splash and drip The temperature has dropped to 40 or 30 And I've no where else to go Treason of comfort builds up inside My haven is falling apart And I have no where else to go I'm getting soaked Then the snakes come out They are everywhere I turn to run and there is no where One snake bites me And I can feel his poison Warm and sharp Such comfort with fear My eyes become affected I fall down Where are his hands Grab my leg and squeeze this poison out Consciousness escapes me And the entire world is numb to my feelings I come to The sun is back I'm outside in an alley Breathing Feeling a fire I'm alive, No shelter, Immune to snakes, Washed clean Indestructible in my impoverish way of life In this hand destructive to pornography My holy one holds me in saftey God blesses. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
& He approaches you with sword of steel rage in hand & it scares the living she-ite out of you, until you realize he is only cutting deep enough to suck the poison out of you and save your worth-saving life. You write deep, dark thoughts of someone struggling To inevitably come out on top of it all. You will! Rider "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. I like your signature. -GIS God blesses. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
spectacular. i dig this, alot, green. (ur still a freak...lol) oh yeah, and i'm really starting to also dig how the responses are incredibly poetic as well. when a poem inspires a poem inspires a poem...a poem inspires (or something like that) kewl! i too love the sig, news. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah thanx eve, Its kinda cool. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
ooo nice. this poem is one of those that you read and you get the words..... but then you read it a second time and you get the emotion and all thats lurking beneath the surface. dark and confusing, but in a good way. awesome love and empathy darkness. Sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Why can't Nirvana actually exist? Its a myth. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I Liked It, All The Feelings n Everything, Great Write... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah thanx. I just write the way it feels and stop when it feels finished. So yeah thanx. Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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