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Dark Poetry #4

Dark Ramblings

PeaceInEverything
Junior Member

since 2002-10-06

Posts 31
Ohio, United States

0 posted 2004-10-24 11:50 PM

My imagination has been let out
Forming a malicious dagger of doubt

Stabbing it deep in my heart
My dream it has not be totally ripped apart

My heart it has tore
Forcing its way through flesh to the core

Its poison seeping throughout me
No antidote no matter how much I may plea

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-10-24 11:54 PM

"My imagination has been let out
Forming a malicious dagger of doubt"

Loved those lines . . .

This is the first I have read of you Chris, and I hope to be reading more of you soon.

~Alli~

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2004-10-25 10:45 AM

I Like These Lines

"Its poison seeping throughout me
No antidote no matter how much I may plea"

Dont You Just Hate It When You Feel That Way? But IT's Ok, Things WILL Get Better Soon

Great Poem By The Way...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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