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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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your back in my face there so i can't avoid you can't leave you alone so i can have you like i wanted you so long ago why now? why do you want me now i've moved on now i'm sick of the sight of you cause i've seen you too many times in my dreams i can't take this im biting my lip at the irony clenching my fists shaking my head trying to rid it of you but your back in my face and no matter how hard i try to get rid of you in my mind or memory your back put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
WOW, I Love This Poem, So Much Feeling To It I Liked This Part The Most "why now? why do you want me now i've moved on now i'm sick of the sight of you cause i've seen you too many times in my dreams i can't take this im biting my lip at the irony" It Is Ironinc, How The Person You Wanted, Wants You The Moment You've Decided To Move On, Well Best Of Wishes To You On This Subject  I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Badababoom! Now that I know what I'm without, you can't just leave me. Soz, evan..... playing all day. Great poem. Badababoom! Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
wicked im guessing L has sumthin to do wit this?? cant wait to see you on sat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love and empathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
L has nothing to do with this one this time lol. hehe just me writing a fictionous poem. (fictionous aint a word huh...) ne ways saturday is gona be soooooo coool! cant wait to see u either! LOR put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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