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Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2004-10-23 09:03 PM

Why have we waited here on wires?
We came this far to watch our shadows burn
Here we are, where stars collide
Witnessed by the seeing eye
It is not certain, nor is it clear
But here in it is where we are

If you should find god, tell him this
“What a waste, in haste, this is…”
And should he tell you all is true
Beat his banter black and blue
With devil wings, we soon shall fly
For god is me, I am a lie…

In tortured stores
Where winters wait
There is a hole
Miscalculated and irregular
It holds no face
No measure of depth
No place to negate
Should it choose to let you in
You may soon notice
It’s not as cold as it might’ve been

Okay, here on wires
Swarmed by events
It all transpires…

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-10-24 12:28 PM

Whoa, I got a end of the world kind of feel, it was awesome, man, haven't heard from you for awhile! Nice, nice poem.

Hollow.
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

2 posted 2004-10-24 02:29 AM

Loved it.
This part especially:

If you should find god, tell him this
“What a waste, in haste, this is…”
And should he tell you all is true
Beat his banter black and blue
With devil wings, we soon shall fly
For god is me, I am a lie…

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2004-10-24 08:24 AM

Wow, I Loved It, Especially These Lines...

"With devil wings, we soon shall fly
For god is me, I am a lie…"

Aren't We All A Lie, At One Point Or Another

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2004-10-24 01:14 PM

I love this very much.
especially this line:
We came this far to watch our shadows burn
so well done.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

5 posted 2004-10-24 03:20 PM

Thank you all. I'm not sure if this is an "apocalyptic" poem, perhaps just an end of SOMETHING, rather than everything...I'll leave it up to you.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-10-24 08:22 PM

"If you should find god, tell him this
“What a waste, in haste, this is…”
And should he tell you all is true
Beat his banter black and blue
With devil wings, we soon shall fly
For god is me, I am a lie…"

great stuff here....

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