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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Pull this imaginary plug and drain Let the jerks suck themselves inside out If I'm lucky they will all become one Mold into a ball and roll away forever Now I'm here and I have a smooth looking option Shes beautiful I love her A dropplet in the center of my barren desert A pet snake With lots of poison The sweetest kiss And a quick slip of the tongue I love the rotten taste Thick robes will make me warm Even with my miniature guest They love me too I provide for them Pure life The dead seemed to have forgotten The day they died Make a brief reminder Remind them when they died Remind them that they are dead Their job now is to rot quietly Peacefully Away from me Let the metal get hot Red Sizzle Oops I remember Darkness surrounds me for a reason Some how it turns out Who can know the dead better Than he already dead Its true Dust, ash Rest there is peace. He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Awesome write, my friend, but even more awesome is the opening 2 lines... perfect! As always, Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah, screw'em. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Let the metal get hot Red Sizzle Oops I remember Darkness surrounds me for a reason Some how it turns out Who can know the dead better Than he already dead Its true Dust, ash Rest there is peace." This poem is freakin amazing! I love this part! (above). You've got talent Craig.  Thanks for the read.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you Alli. This is kinda weird. I know that people like my writting and I'm learning alot on guitar. Actually I think I'm just about ready. Just a few more little things to work at. God is cool. Thank you again. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
LoL Yep That's The Way To Go....SCREW 'EM ALL! haha, You Know, They're Right, It Is A Great Poem, And You Do Have Alot Of Talent Nicely Done Craig (once again i'm only guessing that's ur name )I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you sinny, my name is Craig. He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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