Dark Poetry #4 |
letting go (of you) |
Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
this is a song I wrote for my band forgotten. its sorta based on Crossfades song "so far away" tell me what you think!! Verse 1 I've been changing inside while you've stayed the same I've been spreading my wings while you've stayed on the ground And you refuse to see What I truly am And I refuse to go through this again!! Chorus I'm not going to play the role you've prescribed for me Or let you make yourself out to be -- "the real injured party" Or let you make me feel guilty~ When your the one thats done me wrong (Now) your control over me is gone... Verse 2 Say what you think I should hear (blah, blah, blah) its all the same empty words to my ears -- and I refuse once again -- my choice Not to play your silly game (cuz) I'm moving on while you watch me disapear I'm starting a new life so far away from here! (SO FAR AWAY FROM YOU!! Verse 3 I've been changing inside while your still wrapped up in your self-hatred (and I'm tired of you taking out on me!) I'm letting go of all the lies and you still think everythings OK And you still refuse to see to take a look at your true identity -- So now I'm letting go of you -- and all I used to be -- and all you've put me through... [This message has been edited by Sikanda (10-25-2004 01:14 PM).] |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Wow, I thought it was beautiful, cool wording, I bet it makes a cool song! Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I would just love to hear this with the music. really cool... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I Liked It Too, And It Seems Like It Would Be A Great Song.....Well Done I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
Thanks I'm glad you like it. I think it makes a great song too! Hopefully one day my band and I can record it! |
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