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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-10-16 07:45 AM

1.

The fever rages
before release comes.
We are forever altered
my mortal gestures.

2.

I cared so much
the first time;
enough to burn
the feeling from me.

3.

Still my knight rides.

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-10-16 10:40 AM

You, ~K~, have a rare and beautiful gift for talent. This was so nice. I loved the form! Unfortunately, I am all too familiar with the world's pedestal of chivalrous solitude... still awaiting my shining armor's return, someday.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

News_From_Nowhere
Member

since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

2 posted 2004-10-17 09:53 AM

U R AMAZING !
(Humbly bending on one knee...)
Will U...

Write more for me,
Please! (Smile)

...and repeat from beginning

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-10-17 04:07 PM

First off, I just gotta say how much I love the format of this poem.

~K~, you have such a gift for writing poetry. This poem was awesome! Keep posting.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-10-17 11:04 PM

"Hopeless"

never

always a pleasure to read you

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2004-10-17 11:14 PM

Yeah, just melt away, and let it flow. I tried something I've never done before and read all the posts before I read the poem. They're all right. U R AMAZING.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

6 posted 2004-10-18 03:16 AM

There is nothing I can say, that somebody has already said better.

unbelievable talent is what you are!

proud to have you among me in these blue pages

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2004-10-18 07:18 PM

the ever longing quest for happiness . . .
I do adore your writing, K.

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