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Afraid of the Dark?
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Afraid of the Dark? |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Afraid of the dark? Yeah, me too Wanna entertain our fears? We could talk of politics Or the defacation of once earthly beauty Or love Nightmares to visit Just for kicks and grins, of course Laughter to scream for And in the end We faced the beast Showing its only remnant As gristle stuck between our smiles Let's gawk our way into madness Before another tax is raised Another tree replaced by nuclear reactor Another heart annihilated Wanna tame our inner fears? Yeah, me too Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
awesome poem. I really loved it. "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Cool. I liked it, nice poem. Cool ending too. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow I think this is the first time I've read anything from anyone and the only word in my head was "wow". That was freakin awesome. Wanna tame our inner fears? Yeah me too. I love this. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
really cool kinda alternative, which makes it really intersting. enjoyed it nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Hello my darlin...been too long...just happened to catch a glimpse into that beautiful mind of yours!! miss this. and? "Let's gawk our way into madness"... couldn't we share a few stories here, hmmm??  take care dearest ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Thank you all! And my lovely devina!!!!! God I've missed you so! Stories, indeed to tell! Please let's stay awhile! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"And in the end We faced the beast Showing its only remnant As gristle stuck between our smiles" Awesome! & I was impressed by how you wove the final few lines with messages relative to the first few lines! "Entertain our fears"..."Tame our inner fears" Kewl one, Mr. Gristle! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I agree, I absolutly loved the ending! This poem is amazing...I'll be looking for more posts from you.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nice vent Purity . . . I completely agree What we should be afraid of us what is right in front of us. |
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