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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-10-14 01:18 AM

Slay the dragon,
Sweep me off my feet
Be my prince charming
I'm dead
Til we meet
Again
And you
Deliver
That succulent, sweet
Kiss, filled with warmth
And luscious love.
Hold me, embrace me,
Run your fingers
Through my hair.
I am yours,
You have won me,
Oh jeez, you always had me.
Kiss me now, and never take your
Lips off mine.
Let them entwine,
Let the sweet moisture
Fill us up with giddy happiness.
Never let out lips leave
One another.
Keep kissing me, holding me, embracing me, loving me..
Bring the sparkle back into my eyes,
Fufill me with the bliss
Only you can provide..

A pencil drops,
My head snaps
Up off my desk.
And the bell rings for
Second period.

Oh, my succulent dream,
You are, but a
Tease.

Just because you're paranoid, doesn't me they're NOT out to get you.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-10-14 01:22 AM

hmm its alright haha not exactly dark!

kinda cheesy, the whole wake up from a dream thing.

not the best ive seen aye.

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

2 posted 2004-10-14 01:23 AM

yeah, i think i should've put this one in teen poetry or something like that..it belongs there, and it was cheesy, but its a cheesy thing...

Just because you're paranoid, doesn't me they're NOT out to get you.

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

3 posted 2004-10-14 10:06 AM

Cheesy or not, and actually sometimes poetry like this is welcome cheese lol, I loved it... Took me back a few years, not because of the second period bell, as that was many, many years ago...

but because you made me remember what that kiss is like. God, how I've missed that as of late. Something to inspire to! Thanks

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

[This message has been edited by Purity (10-14-2004 12:06 PM).]

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-10-14 11:34 PM

I hate dreams like that. Because that's all they will ever be. Dreams. But I guess we are predestined to find our soulmate. There will hopefully always be a knight in shining armour for every damsel in distress, or vice versa. I liked the poem, but agree that it could be put in teen...

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

5 posted 2004-10-15 07:06 AM

this is definitly more of a teeen forumone but its kewel... i like it anyway... dam thats how i feel around my ex man....i saw him the other day and everything came flooding back to me...
well written.... even for a 'cheesy' dream poem...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-10-15 06:34 PM

I think it would have gone well in teen, but either way...

I hate dreams like this too. You're all happy and then you wake up and realize that it didn't happened. *sigh*

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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