Dark Poetry #4 |
Lump of Black with a Dull Shine |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
It has soft slimy limbs I'm not sure if they're legs of tentacles They love to grab me They make me do those evil things A warm juicy touch of these limbs Her crown just sits on her head with pride Watch me fall Your tongue is so slick Its romantic fetish Can I have your tongue I'll hold it in my pocket But not forever When I'm done with it I'll stick it in a blender Can you slide over here Wanna touch Flirting with that that destroys Wink wink wink Lets hold hands Handcuffs I'll tie you up And beat you with a club I hope you feel it I hope it hurts You lie to me so Your smelly breath You vile creature You haven't been invited Your so easy You push for it Keep pushing Push through you You'll never win I may sin But you'll never win Even if I sin Leave you with a tender touch With a filleted hand Broken fingers Quivering in fear He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
This would make a good country song... no, wait that's "Let Your Love Show"...lol You've got the "Power", GIS ~ Let it show!! This was a very good, very dark write, and I love the imagery of the tongue in blender! That'll teach her to whisper that garbage into your ears, eh?? Enjoyed! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
If the tongue was part of the physical world yeah. But its not. And she is a stalker not of this world either. I hate her. lol. Thanks Purity. God bless. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
what a way to get at the whispers of the mind.... love the writing gis..... well done.. keep it comin Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you aussie teen. He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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